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Id change a few things.
Instead of "he wanted to see Andre Flo" id say "to Ibrox he wanted to go" Dont say "with his own finger up his bum" drop the own, it works without it. And instead of "im no one to slag" maybe "I dont write for a weegie rag".
Just a few suggestions
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there once was aboy called student joe
to easter road a few times he did go
but he tickled his bum
became an orange hun
and now he goes to ibrox to watch sebo
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