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once there was a stundent called joe
who wanted to see andre flo
he claimed to be a hibby
now we all know was a fibby
hes off to the hunnery in a jiffy!
he claims hes no a hun
with his own finger up his bum
thinking of broxy the bear
suddenly he pulls a pubic hair
im not one to slag
but hibs have the cup in the bag
ive had a bit to drink
which gave me this too think!
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Id change a few things.
Instead of "he wanted to see Andre Flo" id say "to Ibrox he wanted to go" Dont say "with his own finger up his bum" drop the own, it works without it. And instead of "im no one to slag" maybe "I dont write for a weegie rag".
Just a few suggestions
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